In here you wish to fight, you win,
My window to my world, stuck in those starry eyes,
My window to my world, getting larger by the day,
A little rain, a little sunshine, a little to the east it lay!
A little bit of the meadow, a patch of the sky,
Faces, religions, colors, emotions, a handmade bonsai!
My window to my world, a blue house behind the trees,
Creeping bougainvillea wheezing with the breeze!
A little night, a little autumn, a little frame it held,
Somebody’s been crying in the blue house as the night rebelled!
My window to my world, where you see what you wish,
A little compassion, a little bit of courage, but a little selfish,
As I cling to this beautiful squared world, the twilight turns godless,
The marine drive, the Kerala sky, and those sweet rubbing noses!
My window to my world, knows no confines,
No vices, no virtues, no fading smiles, no desires,
Ready to look beyond, to search for that love long due!
In here you wish to have, you sin!
Peeping sunshine, flickering stars, and early goodbyes!
Picture Courtesy: Dp & Enigma :)
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Readers are King Amy! If you say so...Lol... I am glad you liked it! Thanks a million Bud!
Cheerio
dp
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Hey DP
The poem should be titled a "Window to my heart" becoz it seems to open up your heart and soul into the words.......
Wishes,
Amy
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Dear DS,
Thank you for commenting, I got ur note, will surely check up with ur post... wasnt on sul lately these days...:)
Cheerio
dp
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dear dream pedlar
i see hope
i see optimism
i see a thrill
may life take you by its wings and let you fly....
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dear dream pedlar
i see hope
i see optimism
i see a thrill
may life take you by its wings and let you fly....
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DP,
You write well ...very well...and you know I enjoy reading your poems...even though the pain there is too much
reffy
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Hi bina,
I really dont know, how I skipped ur comment.
Well, the last line, I told that ,whatever oyu wish, to the window, its gives, its afterall your imagination, hence the lust increases, and consequently, the sin, goes higher.
You wish to have( something, you get it) and you sin!
Regarding the expanding nature, well, I dont know, if it really is, or just an illusion, thats what the point lies. :)
Thanks bina, you read it so carefully! I appreciate it. Encouraging!
Cheerio
DP
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Pakhi,
Which song? when I formed the words, it was inspired by an anjan dutt song. Its a bong song. and which one are you talking of?
Cheerio
DP
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:)
This ditty reminded me of a song i once knew...a song that was me? :)
Beautiful words ....
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hey LP,
Thanks buddy, Words are encouraging
Cheerio
dp
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