

You have lived a life of fulfillment,
Of accomplishment
A lone star in the northern sky, twinkling,
Inkling
But you could never reach out for that star,
That far
You have known the three windows to salvation
Respiration
You were destined for the three men road to awakening
Resurrecting
A father, a husband and a son, the slices and the toils if life
Consequential Strife
Myriad hues of black and other colors,
Of sorrows and other emotions,
Of twilights and other nights,
Of mothers and others related
Of illegitimate love, and the other halves!
You have always painted black for you, and let the blues, greens and the reds flourish in others, that is why you never knew what a color is.
You have always treaded on sorrows and the path of thorns, so that others can walk over your head, like a heartless brute, that is why you never knew happiness or roses.
You have always dreamt of that splendid twilight, but all you got is pitch dark, emotional rapists and those hallowed nights.
You have defined what mothers are today and of tomorrow, that is you never knew on which relationships stood.
You have always had those secret loves’ and likes’ which you could never express, coz, if once uttered the axe would sure have fallen, hence you never knew what gains are , you always dwelled on pains…
The painting on the wall is fading,
The expression on the face is evading,
The fear and the anguish is turning green,
The unheard whisper till now is rising, murmuring!
But, you have known what it takes for the salvation, which others are still dying to get to… !
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dear kasang, dreams unvieled, wastebuster, elegance, raja ramchandra..
thanks everyone .. for ur comments...
cheerio
dp
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Dream Boy, Congrats. Sorry I got to see your nice write up just now, after seeing the results. Everytime I make it a point to read all the entries..... but missed out this time.
What attract me first is the novel metric, then the central idea, developed step by step.. just lovely. So, you've proved that the path to the crown is through a woman's heart : ))
Well done............. get the party rolling.......... regards ..... Raja.
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Hi DP!!!
Eagerly awaiting your choice of pics now :)
Hearty congratulations for a well-deserved win !!
Have a fun week ahead !!!!
Love,
Me
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Congrats for winning. I don't want to be left out when you announce the next contest. I will send u a special invite !!
Shashi
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Wow! What an imagination! Well written!
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hi vijay,
thanks ... that was a nice coment .. loved it.. u brought it nicely ... wen dreams sweep.. words flow... ha .maybe ...!!!
cheerio
dp
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Congrats, DP!

Extremely well written! And such a beautiful thought!
Kasang
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hello dream...

looks like
when dream sweeps
words roll over
different expressions
different thoughts
all leading to one
colourful and free
congrats...
vijaysathya
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thanks ... lotuspetals ....achillees... and bmw... everyone deserved it .... its just that ..somebody had to be the one ... !!!! thanks again to everybody ...
cheerio
dp
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congrats on winning. and best luck for hosting...
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