
Should I let my soul take over, as I close my eyes?
To see, a beautiful voice –
To be born out of ashes, with a purple mind!
To relieve the darkness and drown in the sun, a hope for mankind!
To make the hallowed nights smaller and the sunflowers prettier!
To search for the unseen, unforgiving stairway to heaven, split the mind barrier!
Should I let my soul walk over, as I try not to see through them?
To hear, a beautiful vision –
To stand again from fallen dreams, finding ground beneath!
To rise into that heavenly space of nothingness, leaving all, of materialistic heath!
To build the shadow of the other life, before we ascend the levels, for that eternal bliss!
To suck back the blood once shed, to un-kiss the shadow of the dead, the poison and the hiss!
Should I let my soul burn out, as I try to save the fleeting glimpse!
To feel, a beautiful smell –
Emanating from the bed of roses, pacifying the unreal senses!
To lie into the cosmic void, floating in a surreal, golden halo, nursing the disjoint bruises!
To tend to the days once gone, and embrace the winds of change, as if nothing else matters!
To search for the lost conscience, in a crowd of cowards, in the marinated backwaters!
Should I let my soul come out of my eyes, as I try to see the reality?
To smell, a beautiful touch –
To a stroke that dilates the coat of dark paint from the true blue skies!
To a mother’s feel, a lover’s zeal, that makes us cry, drop a tear and then rise!
From a vision, to a smell, within a feel, to without a voice,
To see, to hear, to feel, to smell, to express that is a choice!
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wonderful ..........vijaysathya
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Very nice
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amy ...
thanks yaar .. ab kya baataye ..sab bol rahe to .. accha hi hua hain ... :))))) lol... thanks bud .. thanks for ur comments...
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dp
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feeling speechless? c'mon ...i didnt want to be that mean .... its beautiful when u talk ...
cheerio
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refffy .. i love ur comments....:)))
dp
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am doing fine ... umm.. er... yes..quite fine .... meera .. thanks for ur wonderful wonderful words... am sop happy ...
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dp
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thank u indu ... its ma' pleasure .... but this line .. i have to admit .. i couldnt express what i wanted to write ..
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dp
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u flatter me acchi .. i am sure u do ... yes u do ( plz say no !!!!) :))))) heavy metal .. am missing my lappy yaar .. everything is stored tere ...
cheerio
sauvik
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hey womanslove,
thanks bud.. for those lovely wrods .. i am a fan of ur writings too...
cheerio
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Sampathji,
u r one the persons in sulekha .. i highly respect ...!!! and yes ... u interpreted it quite right ... i should exactly the same way .. that it played on my mind .... loved it
cheerio
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